Friday, May 1, 2009

Holden didn't know what he was doing

Marriage

I'm crazy! Nuts! Insane!
I told her I loved her. I meant it at the time.
Now I don't.
I'm crazy!

I'm crazy! Nuts! Insane!
I told her I wanted to marry her. I meant it at the time.
Now I don't.
I'm nuts!

I'm crazy! Nuts! Insane!
I don't even really like her.
Except when I'm around her.
I'm Insane!

I'm crazy! Nuts! Insane!
She's a phony just like the rest.
I don't know why I said it.
I swear to God I'm a madman.

8 comments:

  1. Chorus:
    I’m A Nut (tongue click)
    I'm a Nut (tongue click)
    I'm a Nut, I'm a Nut, I'm a Nut

    I’m a little acorn round
    Lying on the cold hard ground
    People come and step on me
    That is why I’m cracked you see

    Chorus

    Called myself up on the phone
    Just to see if I was home
    Asked myself out on a date
    “Pick me up at a quarter past eight”

    Chorus

    Took myself to the picture show
    Sat myself on the very back row
    Put my arm around my waist
    Got so fresh I slapped my face!

    Chorus

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  2. Dang it! I forgot to put in the tongue click after the final "I'm a nut" in the chorus.

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  3. Great post, this really tells the characteristics of Holden. The repeating I'm crazy! Nuts! Insane! is just brilliant. Nice work

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  4. I'm feelin the format of this blog. The repetition really gets things to stick in your head. The next step is to jump into my beat laboratory to produce Keiran's hit, "I'm A Nut"

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  5. I like the message that you showed through this poem about Holden. It shows his spastic thought process and his contradicting thoughts. I think quote from the book and the section it comes from works out really well to show a lot about him in one place. Nice Job!

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  6. yeah, what the heck Keiran? That song is pretty ballin. And you definitely need to work with Andrew. I'm thinkin you guys could be more popular than that Kanye West. Anybody with me?

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